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criticising a piece of writing isn't the same as criticising the experience - i appreciate how much it means to you, my criticism is of the construction of the poem.

thanks for the review! the quote stanza wasn't too clear i agree, but 'drunk drifted among us' could basically be paraphrased as 'everyone of us was drunk', the 'drunken oscillating ...

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thank you very much! elaborate on painfully constructed?

thanks a lot for the review, i wanted some opinion on the rattling cough thing. i think i went overboard on getting a 'snapshot' by leaving out a 'like there ...

thanks a bunch man!

"there are plenty of poets out there who write a spade a spade and only seek to reflect the nature of the spade in all it's spadeyness" can i quote ...

what even

I don't know whether or not you already have, but please, read Kafka on the Shore. I'm getting into Murakami and started with that and it's absolutely brilliant and the ...

haha, thank you.