embers

i'm sorry to be the only reviewer who says this but this sounds more like an attempt at an aphorism (which doesn't invalidate its status as a poem). it means ...

Unraveling. Your language and structure reveals a character who's unraveling, falling apart, the sentences keep on coming once the mouth opens. You constantly snap back to the dogs for reference ...

this is really nice. you establish a mood in the first stanza and then give it contextual meat in the second. i've always been fond of that kind of poetry. ...

This is going to be very brief because I don't have much to say, I like it as a whole. It's a good piece of writing. Your style of narrative ...

This reminds me a ton of that awesome advert the Red Cross ran recently: - it's one of my favourites, pretty artsy and neat and, unlike other adverts, pretty damn ...

intensely relatable and yet very well written and great execution. damn you're good. my favourite part about this poem is how the number of lines, size of words, techniques etc ...

alright so this is going to be a really cluttered and bad review. I love how intimate this poem is. Very nice imagery, and +points for physics related imagery which ...