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thanks for your reviews guys :) it does have tune and i guess some of it looks stupid written down, but it actually does sound good when i sing it... ...

I really like this poem, I feel the same way sometimes and I've written many a song about it but nothing quite like this. Only one thing I noticed, disappointment ...

This is so gorgeous! It reads really easily and I it's relatable to most people. I think you have written a fantastic poem, well done!

Yo - this is my review. First off, realer is sooo not a word. Also I do not understand what it is about and therefore I cannot review it properly.

Thankyou so much!

Hey thanks everyone for your comments I've tried to take all your advice into account but I haven't changed it a lot Anyway, thanks heaps

I also see this as more of a song, I thought it was actually before I read what section it was in. I really like the idea though

I agree. I think it's sounds good. Keep writing!

cool thanks lol this story doesn't really have an ending yet either haha

Yeah it is actually a song haha

Wow thankyou for the great review!

Hey guys Just wanted to say I realise I didn't say what the dream is and I have acutally done that for a reason. People like to be able to ...

Thanks guys

Thanks guys. I agree with you about the last bit, it doesn't really fit with the rest of the song, but I don't know how to change it to make ...

Thanks heaps :) Smash is my sister haha and i said it with a smiley so it's ok :)