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Hey this sounds like a really interesting story! “Hi!” she says. I grit my teeth, “I’m Caroline.” In that bit it kinda sounds like Emily is the one saying she's ...

I have absolutely no insight into what category this falls under haha But I do think that it does feel finished. You could add more and it wouldn't drag on ...

Hey! I like your writing style and if there more to this I would probably read it haha. When is this set? I take it during a war? Anway sounds ...

ooh i really want to know what happens next! This is really interesting and really well written too, I didn't notice any mistakes. I don't know if that's because there ...

Hey how's it going I just wanted to tell you that I really like these lyrics. They're so easy to relate to and so completely true. Only thing is it ...

I just want to know, is this a based on personal experience? It's so real and you get the message across easily, you've put across you're feelings well. I like ...

Wow, that is really sad. I really like it. I find that songs are so much better when the lyrics mean something to the writer. I also like the fact ...

hey i reckon these lyrics are pretty cool. at one point you say Right then you catched me catched is not a word. the past tense of catch is caught, ...

“Over a month,” he said hastily I don't think he would say this hastily, or at all actually, i don't think he would be very willing to tell her how ...

Hey how's it going? I found this story really interesting although there is a few grammatical errors. For instance, disgracement is not a word - the word is just disgrace. ...

Hey there! This is the first story on this site I have read the whole way through so you should feel flattered!! Haha only joking! I just have a few ...

What Happened I agree entirely. What did happen. I really did not understand what was going on and not in a good way. I'm sorry to be harsh but you ...