A truth, a lie
A smile, a cry
Somewhere the sun shines
But not here
No-it's raining
A rain of colour
Confusion
And screams-
Will you let me out
of this stupid maze
A labyrinth of everything
I don't want to face
Cuz I'm not strong
Strong enough to make it
Through one more masked smile...
A laugh, a sigh,
A love slowly dies,
Somewhere the sea is calm
But not here
No- the waves consume
All I thought
I'd ever dream
Will you let me out
of this stupid maze
A labyrinth of everything
I don't want to face
Cuz I'm not strong
Strong enough to make it
Through one more masked smile...
One more smile
Makes a lie
But I'm tired of lying
Tired of dying
So let me out...
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Hey how's it going
I just wanted to tell you that I really like these lyrics. They're so easy to relate to and so completely true.
Only thing is it was annoying that there were huge gaps between the lines but i think you can fix that easily haha
Anyway, great work