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Wow, what a powerful story. I could easily imagine the horror of what was going on, and it made me feel sick to my stomach, which I guess was what ...

Hey! This made me smile :) It's really well written too and there's no nonsense in there that doesn't need to be in there. Well done :)

Instead of: Solvalery wrote: What I feel is anger What I feel is pain What I feel is there's no worse feeling Than feeling betrayed I think it should be: ...

“You’re wrong,” I told my friend, Jamie, as we sat down at our table in the cafeteria. “You can’t feign love. It has to be felt.” “It’s been scientifically proven ...

All I have to say is there is so books about 14 years olds! I will list them: Georgia Nicolson That other book by Louise Rennison Harry Potter and the ...

I really like this, but it's so short! It says these are lyrics but I feel more like it's a poem, although I'm sure you have a tune etc for ...

Hey! I really like it!! I really like the chorus Come on, just remember Not everybody hates people like us I love this line! I would really like to hear ...

Haha, this is pretty funny. ISAACISAAC BRUSHMORE Morning, Kathy. you accidentally wrote Isaac twice here. loose your job should be lose not loose. ISAAC BRUSHMORE It’s the only they understand. ...

Interersing! Is it actually about a boulder or is it a metaphor for something else? I couldn't quite work that out haha. Courage...don't leave me. Heart...don't falter now. I'm not ...

I think I reviewed another one of your songs, and I have to say I like this one much more. It feels more original and i love the first two ...

I'm sorry to have to say this but it seems a bit cliche. Especially the refrain and the chorus. The verses are good though, I espcecially like this bit: I ...

Hey there! How are you going? The first thing I would do differently with this song is the lay out. It makes it hard to read as a song when ...

I agree that this would be better as lyrics than as a poem. I could wish For you to call I would put this line with the first line so ...

Well I don't know much about Henry the 8th but your knowledge is clearly good. It seems more like a song than a poem in my opinion Look at what ...

Wow, harsh and depressing. I'm guessing you were quite angry or upset when you wrote this? Do you really feel that way? I really like the poem especially the last ...