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Thank you for reviewing! (I'm not good at reviewing either, but I thought you did a great job (: )

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Listen man you know about as much as I do, lol I have no idea what I'm doing. It's about his dead girlfriend/wife, she killed herself by hanging, which is ...

Maybe, but I kind of like how it looks now. Maybe you should try this: You broke the golden chalice that I offered as if it had been proffered from ...

Thanks for pointing that out! I did notice that you rhymed, I just couldn't find a consistent pattern between your stanzas, that's all. Maybe this is proof I do need ...

Thank you for the review! It is one of my darker, weirder poems, I agree.

Thank you! You aren't afraid of spiders? You should be. (:< hahaha jk Thanks for the tips on repetition, I'll need to go back and fix that!

Well now I know that lemons are a thing I can use time to go sprinkle my entire house with it thanks

Thank you for the review! I totally see what you mean about the prayer line, I really need to clarify that line. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you again!

Thank you for the review! I definitely will look into different kinds of formats: I've been meaning too, but now I definitely will! I agree that the breaks between lines ...

Thank you for the review! I actually do agree with you that it could be a little longer. I'll have to look at it and see what needs to be ...

Thank you for the welcome! I found it because I was searching for websites for young writers. The enjambment was completely unintentional - I don%u2019t know why I did it. ...

Thank you for the review! I am overly wordy: thank you for pointing it out to me! I used %u201CShe%u201D about 50 times in that paragraph. Thank you for your ...