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Re: Uglies Series
Oh my goodness yes! It's probably my favorite so far.
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: A toast
awkward to read and could use some more description. Who are you talking about? Definitely a good start, but needs work.
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Connected By Murder
Could use some work, especially in the description area. Make it so the reader can visualize the place you are describing.
Mar 5, 2009