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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Right I only just checked this piece again and I realized I did not reply to this. Thank you so much for your insight and your comments and I'm glad ...

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Thank you so much for your review! You are honestly really sweet :) Thank you.

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me to have people look at my writing and review it so positively. This poem was originally split ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Thank you so much for your review. I am really happy that you captured the meaning behind the line beginning "Hollow screams..." as that is my personal favorite line. I'm ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    Hi There, I really liked this poem, despite its length you really conveyed the idea of how Senseless hope can really be. I love the use of repetition of ideas, ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Isn't Normal and Never Will Be

    I hope you understand, I wrote this after we spent the whole day talking about bullying in class. I am not sad, not depressed and I do not require therapy. ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Isn't Normal and Never Will Be

    Thank you for your review

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Fairy Tale

    I love this. It is very sweet.

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: This is a Love Story - Part 2

    The subtly in how you described the characters feelings, it just made me feel so good inside. This story is will written, it for me has alot of connotations with ...

    Jan 8, 2015


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