elfwriter97

i really loved this; please hurry to post more- im anxious to read it!!! the only thing i would change is that you said "I had friends. Average friends. My ...

Kitty: This, per usual, was absolutely genius, if i do say so myself. I loved the way it rhymed, but wasn't at all forced. It flowed elegantly, like icing laced ...

Dear jane: This was a very well-written, emotional poem, and I absolutely loved it. I think your perspective, language, and descriptions were extremely good in this piece. I only have ...

Jane: Okay, this story was absolutely fantastic. Totally meaningful, thoughtful, and with a moral! I loved this, and couldn't stop reading it!!! I made no note of any spelling, grammatical, ...

My dear Kamas, you have done it again!!! I was incredibly entertained by your series of poems, and thought it was very creatives to make the many poems into one. ...

KingOlion: I thought this was very good, for the most part; here is my cousin's input (who by the way is NOT a writer ^^): -It was good in the ...

Kyousuke: This was amazing. Your descriptions were awesome, and the rhythm was flowing and free, as was your rhyming, which in most cases, tends to seem forced, and not natural. ...

Elly: I didn't know very much about greek mythology, so this was very enjoyable to read. :) I thought it was very well-written, but, when you wrote "He entered the ...