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or just because you hate romance :P but if they have issues within a week of getting together, the relaysh obviously isn't going to work ;P

Ohhh, that makes more sense then! I'd add that in :P And thank you :D

Uno thing: Dude. Parker and Braz just got together officially after a massive wrench was tossed into their relationship and yanked out. I can't toss another one in already. :P ...

*whispers* that would be the best apocalypse

I was going to review this but mostly I just want to ask what the heck is going on and say that I approve 10000% of whatever it is

No problem! Definitely a pretty good little piece for being one of your first :P It makes a lot more sense if Jerome has problems with depression, yeah xD I ...

I'd definitely get behind using this as a base and building on it to make a second, greatly altered poem :D It's a pretty good piece, just needs a little ...

France is Braz's little sister, so yeah, she's Asian. The next scene sort of clears up exactly what the panic attack was over, but yeah, I can totally try make ...

Oh Lord. I'll get the glitter rod ready, then. Poor little Duane :( Yay things to point out! Can't wait for the next installment :)

Haha, I totally dig the fun-sy/practice stories :P I'll focus less on super-epic-original content in the future then, and more heavily on things like character development ;)

Haha, no problem :)

like Braz said, he's comes off and pretends to be a lot more promiscuous than he actually is xD he's just not afraid to get a little slimy with his ...

So I may or may not have done some pretty big edits that switched the focus of the scene xD If you don't want to read, then feel free not ...

Mai as Braz's mom was connected before, but I ended up having to make it more clear in the edits :) Thanks!

Flame? Spark?