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Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)-Chapter 2
Hey there! Sorry it took a bit, but I'm here to review like I said I would :) First of all- wow. A lot happens in this chapter. The big ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)-Chapter 1
Totally! When you get around to posting it, just shoot me a PM or post the link on my wall (:
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: End the "R-Word!"
Your last paragraph: The problem with using these offensive terms is that they're slurs. When someone says "That's so gay," People equate that with the stereotyped concepts of homosexuality, whether ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Centuries - Chapter 1.1
There are men in this story; they're all just unimportant/minor characters until we meet Isuk because chicks are cooler and need more representation than said males. Thanks much
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: I Want To Be Enough
Rhyming never has been and never will be the "backbone of poetry." Ever.
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
It's not a risk at all. The book will, whether or not I want it to, cater to a pro-non binary audience. And, considering one reader I have figured it ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
[i]Hun,[i] I'm not actually creating "fundamental core grammar rules". The pronouns I'm using follow the conventions laid down for pronouns within the English language perfectly. I'm not "making up gr
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
Oh! And Ayo's trusting Tiamata: he's an extremely honest person, and kind of just expects everyone else to be too, even when he knows that someone's as manipulative as Tiamata ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
*nb high five* I'm genderfluid :D I'm really glad I was able to insert just that amount. The temptation to just infodump is almost overwhelming sometimes. I'm hoping that a ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
Aaaggghhh, I'm so glad someone figured out the NB thing and the poly thing so fast
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
Indeed, Tattee is genderfluid. Which means that "she" or "he" don't apply. Se/sem/ser/sers/semself is the set (I modeled it basically after my own pronouns; I reread the piece and all ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
If I meant "she", I would have used "she." The pronoun set is se/sem/ser/sers/semself. Tattee isn't a boy or a girl; se's genderfluid. It's not a typo, and it's not ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: our kingdom too
the "x"s are the start of gender-neutral pronouns, often used by people who identify with a non-binary gender (agender, genderfluid, etc). There are more options for neutral pronouns, but those ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: sometimes a river. sometimes an ocean.
I never capitalize poetry :P I hate capitalizing unless it's for the sake of tone.
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: sometimes a river. sometimes an ocean.
a;slkj;ae I edited it a little bit because you're right, AND I wanted to try something before I totally cut the first few lines xD Better, worse, or the same?
Jun 7, 2014