elan

Thanks for the feedback I will fix those.

This is very true. I had a true friend, but she moved far away, so I lost in touch with her. Other than tat this a very good detailed poem ...

This is a heart warming poem. I wonder if it could have more description of what you felt. Other than that I love the poem.

This was a very good descriptive story. One thing that I think it might need is more detailed work on the voices that the poem is describing.