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This is very far I havent read the previouse chapter.I found myself wanting to read it till the very end.I really like this and can't wait to read the previous ...

This is really good! I have no problems with this piece at a ll. I find the description well as the aim, to keep people interested.This is very good :)

love it if i were you id end it here.

its fine.

this is really good theres so much good description nice job :)

my heart skipped a beatwhen you said the cupboard was swung upon again and the man caught the young girl this is a very very good story if you continue ...

thankyou! your and beks reply were just what I needed ,you dont know how much help you have given me thanks :)

omgoodness you've helped me so much I didnt know where i was going with this story but your ideas fit and im real gratefull thank you veryy muchh:)))

this is great you have such strong language and i just want to read more and more

that was great

that was great

this is very good i loved it

this poem means a lot in many good ways you right so good and so fast keep it up!

wow! this is very good! you have a really good righting style which I'm positive many people would enjoy!! well done!

thanks!!