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Re: Working Title: Chapter Four
AAAA I'm grinning from ear to ear right now. Thank you so much for your review. I've written four other manuscripts (which might be where I learned description?) but I've ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Chapter Two
Hey Blue! Thank you so much for your feedback and encouragement. Alicia is 17. You are right about the system thing, that is something I have to go back and ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 10 (Light Switches and Cephalods)
Sorry, I was just going by what I read. It's review day after all, so I'm trying to get to as many people as possible.
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: A Doctors Visit
Oh yeah (I meant the name of the disorder) so this piece is a memoir about when/how I was diagnosed with postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome. The test is really not ...
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: A Doctors Visit
Thanks so much! The name is super long and kind of interrupts the flow of the writing, so I'm still trying to figure out how to work it in.
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: A Doctors Visit
Thank you so much!
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Chapter Three
Thank you so much! I'm saving up chapters (I have two so far, but I'll probably have four by the end of Sunday) to post after review day is over. ...
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Chapter One
Thank you so much! I struggle a lot with writing character and description so it's really encouraging that my hours of editing have paid off. And I promise, this is ...
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Chapter One
Thank so much! Yeah, everything's is going to pick up the pace, but I wanted to establish a more relatable character before I dive into my main adventure.
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Prologue
Thank you so much, I am definitely going to keep writing! And yeah, whenever I write a first draft it like I'm barreling to the finish line, so I often ...
Feb 22, 2016
