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efrainhernandez

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Art of Writing Condensed into RPG Form

    Clever, very clever. I actually get some of the things you've described strangely enough. Did you just finished playing a D&D game? Personally I found Plot Twist, Prologues and Cliffhanger ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: He beats me

    Wonderfully carved story, however, with one massive dent to fix. Your writing is straightforward and and "to the point" when the plot calls for it. I was curious about what ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jonathan and the new Tv

    Nice solid job. I don't know how long you've been writing but if you're aspiring to become a writer or a novelist then one of the key things you need ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Danggggit!!!!!!!!!

    What I really liked about this poem is that in it's natural state, free verse it seems, you are describing a conflict between the narrator and this prostitute. You depict ...

    Feb 22, 2010


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