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Re: The Art of Writing Condensed into RPG Form
Clever, very clever. I actually get some of the things you've described strangely enough. Did you just finished playing a D&D game? Personally I found Plot Twist, Prologues and Cliffhanger ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: He beats me
Wonderfully carved story, however, with one massive dent to fix. Your writing is straightforward and and "to the point" when the plot calls for it. I was curious about what ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Jonathan and the new Tv
Nice solid job. I don't know how long you've been writing but if you're aspiring to become a writer or a novelist then one of the key things you need ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Danggggit!!!!!!!!!
What I really liked about this poem is that in it's natural state, free verse it seems, you are describing a conflict between the narrator and this prostitute. You depict ...
Feb 22, 2010
