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Thanks a lot! :D :D

I didnt mean it to be a dog but now I see what you mean! :shock:

Thanks, Griffinkeeper!

Ummm... is that good or bad? :?

no, this is not the end, I am still working on it.

guys please could you post your comments on this? Thanks :)

Thank you for the comments! :lol: Not sure the title works for me but nothing else is coming so....

I have taken out a few of the 'the's' - thanks for the info! :D

cheers :D

same, but what I have read so far is nice... :)

Thanks a lot Snoink, this is really useful advice and I am busy correcting it. :lol:

There! Fixed

Dunno what happened... I selected Keep Spaces and nothing happened...

Yeah that is a really good name. These are only the first five chapters - I promise plenty more horror!