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Thanks! I wanted Peter to be an all-around happy person. I didn't mean for him to be feminine, but I modeled him after this guy from my school, and that's ...

I was thinking of reasons why Elijah is so pessimistic, and I was thinking maybe his father was murdered when he was little or something or his father just died ...

I fixed the missing quotation mark, but I think Elijah was just calling Peter, Pete like Peter calls him Eli.

Kara Hargreaves covered all of the issues in the story, so no need to point anything out. Overall, I really like the whole plot of the story like I mentioned ...

Okay! I like your suggestions. I mentioned to you how I modeled Peter after Jesse from class. I hate to tell you, but mostly every guy in my school hugs ...

Awesome poem!

Awesome poem!

Thanks for poiting those out. I'm new to the whole typing stories thing, so stuff like that may happen a lot. Thanks for being nice about it though. Most of ...

Thanks!