drflapjack

Hello, drflapjack here. I really like the rhythm of this and the rhyming. Also the I agree with Arathorth when they said that maybe you should change "The world may ...

Hi user drflapjack here, This poem is very touching. I can really feel what this depicts. I really love the entire thing, but the fourth stanza is just... "I've thought ...

I love how you use the colors. This is a very interesting and meaningful piece of literature. There's only one thing that bothers me and it's the line "bright and ...

I have to say this is a magnificent poem and I want more. I love how you say your statement then elaborate and delve into a meaning of why the ...

Hi user drflapjack here, I really love the idea of this poem and I truly identified with what was said. It started strong but then I got a little confused ...

Cia! User drflapjack here! Oh, god this is an incredibly well written piece of literature. This sestina is very interesting and dark, which is a plus. I absolutely love the ...