dreamwalkeramrita

Hi! :) I enjoyed this chapter as well. I liked how you managed to sustain the mystery of what happened after the tree was felled well up to the middle ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this chapter! This kind of reminded me of Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norell (which I loved). The premise was interesting, and I also enjoyed your description ...

Hi! I really loved your story. I liked your writing style, which was descriptive without impeding the flow of the narrative. I was sucked in from the very beginning..you have ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this story...I liked the internal monologue, and there weren't too many descriptions, which would hamper the pace of your story. You managed to capture the dread ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this story...:) I liked how it was written in the form of a parable or fable. And I also like how you didn't name any of ...

This was mesmerizing! I liked your concept of healing...its not just a couple of magic words and a flash of blue light and then boom...healed...The fact that knowledge of the ...

Hi! Wow, the first paragraph really hooked me in...I could literally feel the wind and its fangs sinking into me! And your world-building skills are just about a page you've ...

Hi! I really loved this story...or perhaps this is a vignette. Anyway, I loved the vivid descriptions and imagery. Also, the ending line is so expressive. I love endings like ...

Hey! I enjoyed this was interesting. I liked how you interspersed flashbacks with the present. I did have a few qualms with the writing in places..but overall I think it ...

Hi! I loved this! It was interesting, inventive and well-written! Your descriptions are original and subtle. And I liked the ending as makes me want to read more! I'm looking ...

Hey! This was an interesting piece. I had a few issues with the first paragraph though. "TOO open nature" could have been replaced by something else in my opinion. But ...

This sort of reminded me of a Goosebumps novel I read when I was a kid...somehow every choice, however rational, always ended up getting me killed in some horrible way ...