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Re: Blessing
i like your poem. it was very good. i think that how you made the lines ryme was very good. and that you do need to keep writing. i like ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: and he wonders why things never change
i think that you did a very impressive job writing this poem. i have nothing bad to say about it. all i can say is you better keep on writing.
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: I was dreaming the night he died
i liked your poem. it kept me intertained. i thought towards the end that it got a little sad because he just turned and walked away? i think that is ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: A Letter To The Author
i like your letter. i really liked how you did the ending. it was simple yet still in a way comical
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: your great might
i know i havent really wrote very much so thanks for the comment.
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
your a good wrtiers but are you advoiding love? it sounds likeit
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Die by the Gun
i also agree with polarbear14. but i also really liked your poem. it was nice and easy going. it flowed nicely. i also like how you didnt end everything with ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: When They Came
this is really good
Oct 13, 2011