dreamseaker

And god knows we expect love. He knows, though before B-flat rolls of thunder,he squeezes a bit too tightly on her throat,leaves love cold and unmoving,unresponsive as your lips when ...

i thought the poem was very good. i enjoyed how it was a memory instead of the future. i feel that sometimes when people write a poem about the future ...

i enjoyed your poem it was really good. i am in honers english 10 also know as pre AP english and i cannot write that good. i like how everything ...

i enjoyed your poem but i kinda got lost towards the end. it just keot repeating in a way that loses my interests. i think that if you take away ...

i like your story but it was hard to follow at times. some parts of it rhymed and others didnt and that made my reading it kinda get thrown off. ...

i love your peom i thought that it was so detailed and so sad at the same time. it filled me with mixed emotions and that can be hard to ...