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Re: Something Real
Hi there! I'm drama_queen, and I'm going to be your reviewer for today! I really like the beginning of this. It was written very simply and it was easy to ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: I was bored...
I liked this. It was short and sweet. I don't think there needs to be any more, but of course that's just my opinion. I do think that you could ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Seven Letters [Revised & Lengthened]
That was really beautiful. I'm sorry, but I really can't find anything wrong with it, except that it ended. It really was amazingly written. I'm almost crying right now! The ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Politics
Hi there! I really liked this. It was really well written and it made me stare at the screen, waiting. And then I continued reading, and I got confused. That's ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Maverick
Hi there! I see you're new here. So am I, but I'd just like to point out that this website has a two for one policy. That is, you should ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Still Standing
The idea is good, and I really lied your prologue. But the next bit isn't as suspenseful as you made it out to be. You need to describe what she ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Snacks n Sips
Hey there. This is pretty good. It may not be a brilliant piece of literature, but it's sweet and quite funny. It's nice to read if you're not feeling to ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Problems in the bathroom
Hi there! This was really funny! I didn't think I'd ever have that much fun reading about a bathroom, but this was brilliant! This was a problem I thought scratching ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: dyfam. (chap. 3)
Yay! Okay, I still have to say that your first bit was my favourite, but I did like this more than the second. “I know, love, I know I don't ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: don't you forget about me. (chap. 2)
I can't say it was as good as the first chapter, but that could be because I wanted it to be longer so I'd have more to read. It seemed ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: don't you forget about me. (chapter 1)
Really like this. A lot. I mean, I love it. And I don't know why, because I'm not so into romance, although I'm getting more used to it. But there ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: The Most Unusual Thing I Ever Stole
Hi! I really liked this, but it was really long. Maybe you should put each chapter separately? Also, your second chapter ended in the middle of a sentence. The beginning ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Love is blind
I liked this, but maybe it should go in Romantic Fiction? It seems to be a love story of sorts. After Martin was so enthralled over The Greek Gods our ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: My Truth
HI there! I'm pretty new to this site and I've been looking at some of the scripts, and I really love yours! I like acting, and if I were given ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Get Over It
I liked it, but it was very short and fast. I'd like to see some more dialogue between the characters. You should slow it down, and of course add more. ...
Jun 4, 2009
