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Here it is! It will be revealed later that the white dragon is similar to the avatar (from Avatar the last Airbender). The past white dragons lend their power and ...

So glad you enjoyed! This was one of my favorite chapters to write. So... If you want to know what Brazor witnessed (and thus the reveal it implies) I would ...

I continue to love your theories and questions about the story. :) The 'binary code' aspect was meant to give a futuristic/science-y feel to the way magic was viewed by ...

I was so worried that this would feel like a lot of exposition, but from your comments it seems like that wasn't the case. Yay! As for what you said ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed! The next few chapters are heavy on the info side since it's all Brazor teaching Jarid what magic is truly all about. I considered simplifying ...

I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw you had left this review. It is so great to see your comments and theories :) I enjoy reading ...

Your reply was honestly a lot nicer than I was expecting. Thank you for being so sensitive and considerate. I am still exploring my own faith and I totally agree ...

I assume you do not believe in God or anything like that (which is up to you) but I don't think anyone should make fun of what others believe. If ...

Love the backstory. I may come back to read more in the future. It was a great read :)

Thanks so much for the review, and glad to have you back! I will certainly add more description for queen Sear but I held off on Hearth since I describe ...

I didn't realise that shifting to Airel's perspective would be jarring. I didn't have the words to describe how she felt seeing Shadow for the first time so I decided ...

Thanks so much for the review! I am also a big fan of the How to Train Your Dragon world. Your advice about commas is noted. I am not the ...

A little extra info in case I haven't mentioned it. 'Shadow's Rising' is the first book in a series I plan to write called "Tales of Dragonight". Thus the reason ...

Thanks for the review! It can definitely be difficult to review a chapter from the middle of a book. Good on you for doing your best. I definitely see your ...

This review definitely gave me some great ideas. I'll definitely describe Hearth's appearance and Smolder's reactions more thoroughly. I had to go and check but I did mention that Jarid ...