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Thanks Rinisha, I actually planned to write a whole story for Umbra and her friends. A short book about the Night Wings and the events leading up to the beginning ...

Thanks for the review. I think you're really going to like Chapter 6. Part 2 of it especially. I want to give my reader a big range of emotions. Up ...

This is not a fan fiction but it is heavily inspired by wings of fire. The character of Shadow was actually inspired a lot by Moonwatcher. I loved her powers ...

Thanks for all the corrections. I may have to go through my book again and replace all my periods with commas lol. I love your idea of the twist of ...

Ah, I wasn't sure if Team Tortoise was a group. Thanks for confirming. I also wanted to say I love what you guys/girls are doing. Your excatly my kind of ...

Thanks again. I really appreciate the feedback and constructive criticism. I was actually curious if someone would notice Shadow was seeing what the dragonets were doing lol :) For now ...

So glad you enjoyed ;) I'd love to have you point out any grammar errors you see as they can sometimes leave a reader confused. (Side note) when Jarid mentions ...

Ok, Thanks. For that specific scene I wanted to make Quake sound really dull but I might still break up his longer monologue. You also use a lot of description ...

Thanks for the review and the corrections. I'll make sure to update this after I've fixed them. As for the setting, I mentioned it a bit at the start but ...

Thanks so much! This is a great example of what a review should be. A bit of encouragement and pointing out areas that can be improved. I do try to ...

Thank you so much! This is very encouraging to hear. I wasn't sure if posting sections this long would be off putting to readers on this site or not.

Thanks for the review, I am so glad to see you enjoyed. I'll definitely take what you pointed out into consideration

Thanks so much for the review! I loved Spidey too, so cute! If you want to know more the story before this your should read the first part of Darkness ...

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Thanks so much for the review! I was able to change the more grammatical errors you pointed out. (in the first quote I had wanted to say that Jarid's home ...