dragonfphoenix

That was just an attempted explanation of the 3 story worlds concept. I haven't settled on a firm explanation yet. I'm not sure I understand what you're going for with ...

well like I said 12's too loose for me. if you feel that's appropriate, then that's your decision. And PS I don't think it's the greatest idea to judge what ...

it's not a broken promise; I just haven't posted the next chapter yet. But it's there. No worries ;)

ah, yes thanks for catching that. I'll fix it when I get time. thanks; I'll try to keep up on this as much as I can

Hey, that's fine. I have another chapter up, fyi

glad you like it. I'm trying to get as much up as possible. And that would be interesting...how would people even go about trying to cinemize this? That would be ...

I only do so to mess with her. That's what makes it fun [and spreadsheets are invaluable at times for keeping track of so many characters. It's either a quick ...

Yep, although it took a few chapters to get her to it. 1) Oracle knows what it means. That doesn't mean she's telling me what it means. [I hate it ...

Try "Because you're beautiful, he says." I think that'd fit nicely.

I am going to fight the urge to reply to everything you said here again. The only reason why I did so the first time is that such is my ...

I will try to break up these paragraphs at some point. You are not the only one with a complaint on their length, so I'm going to address it at ...

All right, I'll try to make this as short as possible :D Spoiler first, People keep commenting on the thoughts idea, which is comforting for me to know that the ...

This is the 6th chapter, so if you do read this story please start at the beginning. The link is over on the right side of this page under 'related ...

Very well written poem. Your imagery is vivid, and I liked all the metaphors you had in it. Especially the one about the times table. That seemed to stick out ...

Glad you liked how this turned out. I will leave the first two 'big' paragraphs alone for plot reasons (with the second I still have no idea what Fiera's going ...