dragonfphoenix

Just wanted you to know I've done some editing to the poem and tried to bring out the intended message more. Hope those changes improved it.

I've done some edits based on Kyllorac's comments, so hopefully the intended message comes out more plainly.

It can be interpreted that way perhaps, as you have pointed out, so I will look into that. This isn't a finished piece yet, and I need to give it ...

I know the frustration. First two acknowledged. With the third, what I meant was how cut and dry Civil Rights was. Racism is WRONG, which makes that a black and ...

While I respect your opinion, the underlying premise of the poem is pedophiles that hide under the auspices of being 'transgender.' Thus I treat them as 'beasts' throughout the entire ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked this.

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the poem.

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. I may work on it some more in the future, but I'm not sure at this point. I'll let you know if ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I realize the threat was kind of vague. I only had enough space in the assignment to get there, so we'll see if I pick ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I realize it was short. That's all I had room for in the assignment, sadly. (And you have to love it when the teacher says ...

Magenta, it looks like you might've forgotten to mark this as a review. Did you? If so, I can fix it for you quite easily.

Try this . Or this . Basically any OWL site works. Glad to help!

Haha, I know what you mean .

Glad to help. (And you could have just called this a fanfic and left Slendy dead. Fanfic means you can do whatever you want. ;) But I understand why. And ...