draftofstars

I really enjoyed this poem. The broken yet descriptive vocabulary really enticed the mind, yet leaving it up to debate. I am going to be completely honest, I have no ...

This was great, and I love the concept of the weird black thing. But, i do feel like you need to employ the phrase 'show, don't tell,' a bit more. ...

This was amazing! I did not read the horror genre marking thing, but it made it all the better! I was not expecting to be hit by this, as i ...

I absolutely love this poem! The way that you describe your experience is amazing, and also real. I do feel like your prose could most definitely use more lyrical flow, ...