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Dream in Technicolor : Thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad you liked it, you brought a big smile to my face. :D ~Dommy

Clo , Thanks so much. The reason Isabelle doesn't think her parents will believe her about the rape is because of the rapist... Once you read the first parts it ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! It isn't really poem like, I agree. ha ha errtu2. Don't worry, you weren't being bitchy at all. The_Vizier Don't you worry either, I take ...

xXxEllaxXx, thank you so much for the review. I do agree with you, having Dani cut herself on the trolley is a little far fetched but I just wanted to ...

This is really great. I liked the part with Rosalie making fun of Alice's 'feelings' it tied in Edward's description of their special talents. I couldn't really find any mistakes ...

angelcat2958: Thanks for reading it; and don't worry, you weren't harsh at all. ~Dommy :D

Aww!! I'm so happy Edward and Elaine are going to be friends! The characters are great and I liked how you captured Elaine's innocence and how you made her mom ...

Ahhh this is so ridiculously good!! I can't wait for more!! ~Dommy :D

olivia1987uk thanks for the review! FFF Veneta is an inland city. haha I guess you can tell how much I looked up on Veneta! But I get what you're saying ...

haha I love the actual books and you had me cracking up! :lol: ~Dommy

Curlyqpride, Wow. thanks for that comment. I'm just choked up right now that it actually affected you like that, I didn't know it could do that. Thanks doesn't even cover ...

Jay : Thanks so much you have no idea what that means to me! Fangala : You're right.. it is a wicked weird coincidence and also thanks for reminding me ...

Ashleylee, Thanks a lot for the reviews to both chapter 4 and 5, and don't worry about the whole time thing, it's totally fine. I agree with you on Ethan ...

Thanks Jay. I didn't even notice the Carl Kyle thing so I probably will change that, you're right, they are too similar. :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks ...

Ha this was soo great! I loved the ending and the thought of a transvestite superhero is amazing!! I'm not going to mention the mistakes because others have already stated ...