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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mama

    Okay so the poem is talks about a girl who moves a lot and was a victim of bully. Her mother is poor and have no money to feed the ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Covenant Chapter 1 -The Hidden Skeletons

    The story is kinda confusing. Who are Victor and Castell to Lucille and her family. Who was the lady with the large red curls and dark chocolate eyes. How did ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The author & the fiddle player (prlg)

    The poem is kinda sad. If the character is gay, you should make that a little more obvious. You should have also written how the character's boyfriend got to the ...

    Sep 1, 2014


Adventure is worthwhile.
— Aesop