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Hello there littleauthor! Dogs here with your review. Ok so this is a good piece, you're on the right stepping stone here but you need a little bit of work. ...

"holds a drink in his had" Specify what kind of drink, naturally we assume that "drink" means booze, but as a reader I'm not 100% sure. So say is it ...

Howdy doo Deanie dear! Dogs here with your review as requested. So I think this is a simply wonderful story. I loved reading, the idea and point of this poem ...

Hello there Leti! Dogs here with your review. Okey dokey so this is a wonderful piece, I love the imagery you use and it kinda reminds me of my favorite ...

I already know that this piece is just going to be enlightening in the ways of jaw dropping writing. So I'm just going to put my nit pick hat on ...

"having survived the existence of electric entertainment." Oh I just love that line, wonderfully crafted and so incredibly smooth. On a side note you have a killer killer start to ...

Hello Hemayed. Dogs here with your review today, so interesting piece writing in the kind of little kid story format. I think your writing style is too choppy for this ...

Hello Ariana! Dogs here with your review today, ok so this is a good piece. I like the idea of it, you have some issues with your rhythm a couple ...

“Tell Lonn I send him greetings.” That just sounds weird, like what we would expect Aliens to say in place of "regards" and what not. Of course this is in ...

"It was a question Jeremy of everyone upon their first meeting" Howdy do Trident, ok great great opening line. This piece is so good that I'm gonna have to put ...

hellooo there sherlock! Dogs here with your review today. I love this topic and the writing style you use for this is brilliant. Under normal circumstances I would vote against ...

Hello there chel! Dogs here with your review. Ok so this is a good piece and I love the whimsical style and idea of it. Great advice to the heart. ...

Hello there Sky! Dogs here with your review today. Ok so to start I like your sense of rhythm that you use very well. Most the time you use the ...

Hello there rabbit! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here and you can always send me a PM or anything ...

Hello sparkle! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly I love your avatar, Free Willy is a quality movie! The original that is, they went a little too far with ...