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That pun made me laugh so it's fine haha and you're welcome! I hope this poem turns out for the best!

I think you would make the better decisions on your poem, but I do think you should extend the conceit, add metaphors, more imagery, personification, etc. to both clarify what ...

Thank you for your review! I'll definitely take your comments into consideration :)

Thank you for this review! And this is a nonfiction story about myself, but I tried to write it in a way that the character is a more defined form ...

Thanks JC, I enjoyed reading your review. :)

And I have to disagree that capitalization doesn't matter in poetry because it can be incredibly important in some poems. Although I do appreciate you stating the freedom there is ...

I didn't mean the comments as grammar errors, but errors in consistency. Remaining consistent in poetry is important because differences alter the meaning of the poem.

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Thank you for your suggestions! :D

Thank you! I'll be sure to keep you in mind when I write something new! :)

Thank you! And I understand what you mean by the terrain, but have you ever been traveling through a desert and then you turn the corner and suddenly, BAM, it's ...

Thank you Alexsushidog! (:

Thank you so much! I'm glad I can go to you with my writing :)

Thank you! :)

I didn't really think to write a sequel. And yes, there are so many things the reader doesn't know or understand, but I think I want that air of mystery ...