dianis97

It was good...but I found a couple of grammatical mistakes, but they were not too bad, I also think you should tell us more about the characters, talk more about ...

wow, that was short, I think this is not fiction Its poetry. I liked it, it isn't my favorite tough some advice: Remember to use coma's you should expand was ...

AMAZING! I really enjoy reading this, it's really interesting and it keeps me wanting more. I really like how you used the spanish, it made it more interesting, there was ...

OMG! that was so cute :D, you did an amazing job. I just want to keep reading the rest of it. I really like how you showed that your main ...

W.O.W, I really liked it, good job! i really like how you showed Hermione's strong emotions and how Ron coonforted her, you did a really good job with the characters, ...

wow...its a very different from the twilight we all know I think its awesome how you took the characters and developed them in your story, it was really good, i ...

That was amazing!, you captured the characters really well, it really make me feel like if i was reading Stephenie's writing! nice job, I've got nothing bad to say about ...

Hi! Wow I really liked it, it was really good. please keep posting more, the ending was awesome, owever I think you should describe more the character, I would like ...

Wow I really liked it, it wasn't what i was expecting, but It was cool I think the end was really beautiful, and i agree with you, the word "always" ...