dhyan

Hey!!! Great work!!! The title you've named its so perfect. Because everything you say in the poem, YOUR NOT. If everything you say is true, which is to be falsified ...

Wow, i love this piece. Its short and sweet. A couple of things to maybe improve this: Maybe you can structure it a bit. It seems all over the place. ...

Hey Gaurav, You've got some good writing hear. Lots of dialogue. I like it, short and sweet. If you could replace this : "'You are going on wrong path son,' ...

Hi llamallamajam, Apart from the spelling mistakes (of course because you were in a rush or writing for fun) and t the informing style of writing, which i'm less comfortable ...