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Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I read Twilight before all the hype and I don't know it was just... mediocre. It was exactly what I expected from a book about teenage vampires. And I'm a ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Finders, Keepers
I don't have much to say except that I really enjoyed this. Mrs. is such an interesting character but I would like if you explored her past and why she ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: reversed rewind (standalone)
I like the mysterious tone of the entire story, but you can add more description about the city and everything without detracting from that. The part about him being four ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Child's play part 2
Here I am, bitch. Maybe you should put Lilith's whole cutting paragraph somewhere else so she can stay mysterious. That entire passage from her perspective really stuck out with you ...
Sep 1, 2009
