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Re: Limerick 2
that is a cute poem. lol that is pretty funny. such and odd way to rhyme lol
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Blue Oceans (2 of 3)
that is a very good poem it catches the eye to read more ya know? good description i really like it though i would say listen to the people that ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: In the Arms of a Warlock - Chapter Three
this is good! i like it! lovely description good wrod phrase and an awesome dream!keep that pencil FLowin!
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
Hello! i Love your description but killing that young boy, Chris that is so merciless!oh my gosh that is so sad!i was crying on my keyboard when i read that! ...
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Re: Jacob Black's War with a Mozzie
from the way this was written it is definitly dramatic and by the words you are a jacob black lover right there. beautifully written kind of funny but work on ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Unravel
Hello Ofir! i think this is a great poem it really expresses feelings in someone. i love it. there is maybe a few things proximtealy guessing but so far its ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Contest Entry- Poetry with a wonderland twist!
very funny.really it is.
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The boy I fell for
thats is actuall a good poem. i like it.
Dec 2, 2011