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It sad and depressing but so are alot things eg Ann Franks diary

Yeah sure i ave to continue the story on another Thread now

Thanx

Even more better

Fantasy thread

Thanx

intresting it was a bit confusing but intresting keep it up

Brillant it good it starts fast and got my attention unlike adverts anywayz it was very good

soz did not relize that.Took so long to read

I believe in Ghost but Vampires that drawing the line come on if vampires did exist don't you think they killed us but very factaul i need to look up ...

Just one question if u are going to have get his mum killer what about MIND REVENGE

eh that does not make sense it had gone through the spell check when i had gone put it on

Brillant it a fast moving poem that wat i like about and by the is the beast a Tiger

Not enough info and also to much rhyming poem don't ave to eg i wrote a poem in p3 IT DID NOT ALL RHYME

That was a great story but could you give us some background of the salian plz but great story