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Whoa that surprised me at the end never expected that. Intresting rythem, but Grif and Llama are right loudly slows the rythem. Apart from that great poem really surprised me. ...

Whoa that great Liz. You did the right thing i'm sure.

OKAY????? That seriously scared me... Note to self must go into Therepy soon.

Okay this reminds me of something and hugged has two g's. Attempt spelt with a p in it. Throw is spelt like that. I know what this remind me of ...

There were hundreds of them all grinning like crazy, and all wielding a weapon of some sort. He backed against wall and prayed for a miracle. Then David thought they ...

This is getting so good Adam i've no idea what period it is, but it is such a great story. Keep it up it's getting intresting.

This is great also Joss Whedon a god so that makes it better but the end is a little cliched.

lol that great like it how it like Who Framed Roger Rabbit lol. Daffy could do that he is always abused, so be warned folks this could happen perish the ...

Heh yeah Liz it was great and funny, some day we'll look back at all this and laugh.

God that powerful and true did you did you misspell shite and Bitch deliberately. Apart form that seems generally a good poem keep it up. :D

Whoa that is great i like the first part it seems so right that part. The second part really shocked me, but at the same made me want ot read ...

Sorry Liz when i started reading this yesterday i ran out of time, it's good and i don't think it cliche it's just seems that i think. Anyway intresting could ...

Sheesh these get better each time, more must have more.

Oh sheesh that is so great, it's like that comic American Splendour.

lol that is great keep it up i'll read the rest now. I liked how you kept using that same term it made it more funny.