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About the head swelling... worst case scenario, I will buy bigger hats ;-) Hehe, cheers

Thank you for your review! When I saw the huge paragraphs you had quoted, I was starting to get worried that I had blundered on such a large section lol! ...

Sure, tag away!

Hi Cricket! Thank you for your awesome awesomeness that is another one of your reviews :-) I checked out the link, thank you so much, that clears it up. I ...

Well, believe it or not, PC isn't at the level I want it to be yet. There are some published authors who finished like 15 novels before publishing their first ...

Hi Wisegirl! Thanks for your review. All I can say was that I was a much more naive writer at the time, and I am actually going to overhaul this ...

Lol, you and your crazy coolness! Your pic of Spike is huuuuuge lmao! At first I refreshed a dozen times coz I just saw the corner and though that the ...

Haha! I love how you can switch between nitpicking and totally geeking out! That's a great balance for a reviewer to have ;-) And then you signed it off so ...

Hi Cricket! You're reviews are always awesome, this one is fabulous too! Your nitpicks are always educational, and I am saving all of your comments for when I am rewriting. ...

Thanks a lot wisegirl22! Yes, that is actually what happened hehe... I sat there for several minutes trying to decide if I was about to erase all the letters and ...

Thanks Noelle! Your review was extremely helpful :-)

Haha! No worries, so much going on around YWS, I didn't even notice your lack of reply. I think you starred it so that's cool ;-) Getting there with PC... ...

All clubs are basically Greedy Eyes central. Haha, thanks for your comment!

Welcome to the site! Quick tip, if you are writing a review, make sure you click the little tab below the text box that says "Is this a review?". If ...

Thank you Sherri! That's a wonderful compliment! My goal is to write narrative that creates immersion, so I'm glad I managed to do that for you. Feel free to check ...