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Thank you WriterX! Feel free to read it from the beginning if you have not yet done so. I'm glad you liked it! Take care

Thanks for the feedback! These early chapters were written when I was a lot younger, you'll see improvements after a certain point. This was when I picked it up again ...

Zambia hey? Hello neighbour! :D I hope the book will be available there as well. I've been reading fiction about Africa written by the west and I'm not thrilled with ...

Thank you for your great review! I'm guessing you are either from Africa or have some interest in our beautifully complex continent. Look out, many of us are working hard ...

Thanks Noelle! I've been delayed in posting new chapters, busy holiday season and all, and I rather miss reviews. I don't mind one bit that you're back a few chapters! ...

I will write it out with gaps so you can see the code: [ quote ] Words you want to quote [ / quote ] Hope it helps!

Hi Vivian! Hehe, I don't know what museum I'd put this in, hehe, but I don't think I'm at that good yet. It may be quite a challenge to tutor ...

Hi Cricket, welcome welcome! I think I'll take it as a compliment that you dig deep for my work hehe... :-P Hope it's not too much like homework though! You're ...

Awesome! Good strong start, keep going. I'll definitely look out for Boravich now!

Woohoo! Welcome to chapter 19! And I see your British quirks hehe You're right about Senra, she is quite selfish and is mainly concerned with Nikki to meet her own ...

Yay! Your instincts are on the money, it definitely does get more intense from here... I hope you'll enjoy the ride! From here onwards are my most recent chapters, whereas ...

I say go for it! Don't give up on it, just write it in a way that your story doesn't get lost in the details. To be honest, I ended ...

Thanks for your review! I write in British English, and "favour" is the correct spelling there. Confusing, I know. Thanks for the tips! I agree with the rest of your ...

Hey, its only fair! Detailed reviews deserve detailed replies :-) Funny enough, I have always had an easier time at third person, first is the weird one for me to ...

Hi Traunt! :-P Thank you for your review, and your compliments too! I will try address each point you made. I feel as if it should say "so they rode ...