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I question why you wrote the whole thing in italics...

Who cares if we're giving up sunlight! Glowstones all we need to keep things bright down here in the nether!

It's deep underground past the bedrock, but don't dig straight down you'll regret that!

What'd it say?

Interesting.

The message is more important then the vocab.

And in here, you misspelled "favorite". No, no, it's perfectly valid, but I prefer the non-British term. Do not fix something that does not need spelling and who said this ...

This isn't about the character, you need to take a closer look at it.

This review has been ignored, have a lovely day.

We don't want money, if you'd clicked the link you would've seen that.

This was written about two years ago. Also just saying you are awesome!

Why the hell was a speeding truck on a sidewalk at seven in the morning? Well i'm no genius but it was on the road. And lots of trucks are ...

'"Don't know yet. My boyfriend is surprising me." She said excitedly.' - Woah, woah, woah, when did that happen? Since when were they going out? She was lying so it ...

Good god this is shit! I shall rewrite it right now.