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Hey there As promised, here's the review :D I greatly enjoyed reading it, and am glad I did ! I'll take a look at chapter 2 once I've posted this ...

Heya, As promised, here's the review :D I really liked the story, especially because of the description and the way in which weaver suddenly becomes a crocodile monster thing. The ...

Hey Dono I enjoyed reading the story, it is a really interesting concept, having Hunter change like that. The descriptions of the friends are also good, and I can really ...

Oh my God Suzanne, yet another piece of incredible work! It's really nice, and I love it. Really, try to get it published someday, for it is definetly of good ...

Hey there Second piece of your work I review in one day XD I enjoyed reading it! It was well-written, and apart from some mistakes there wasn't too much I ...

Hey there, Welcome to YWS ! I enjoyed reading your work, it's pretty good! At some points it gets confusing, but I'm sure you can solve this by using more ...

Wow. This is a really strong piece! There's one thing that confused me though. In the beginning you say "best friend" and later on "sister." so it gets confusing. I ...

Hey ! I enjoyed reading this, I really like it. It's clouded by mystery and questions, which makes it compelling to read. Post more of this story sometime, I'm curious ...

Hey there :D I really enjoyed reading what I've read so far! It is really good, and an interesting concept! Alicia needs to be developed more, and she needs to ...

Hey there! I enjoyed the concept you were working with, and think this is an excellent story to make into something longer! It has the potential to become a more ...

Heeeya Here I am again, commenting on part 2 ! I like the theme of your story :DD I enjoyed it, and think you leave it with excellent suspense! Well ...

Hey there:D I said I'd review it, so here I am ! I like the topic of the story, I'm a huge fan of crime scene, investigative, police, etc stories! ...

I really liked this !! I'm not good at critiquing poetry so I really have no idea what else to say about it :wink: I like it !! XxxDo *gold ...

This is really well written !! It's amazing, and made me feel really really sad. You've really managed to wind strong emotions through the story. It's really sad though, its... ...

:D I'm gonna read it right now ! You were supposed to PM me when you put it up, remember ?? :wink: XxxDo