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Mesh> Are you talking about my first post or second? My first post I said I think it was the words that made me read faster. Second posts was telling ...

leaves may fall the same time each year; petals droop and die, snow drifts, day concedes to night concedes to your eyes meeting mine like magnets. yet, this year: time ...

Read a poem aloud and people and all will connect to its underlying psychological principles in exactly the same way; they will appreciate the form and structure, rhythm and rhyme ...

Your right, I do have to move away from the self loathing phase I am in. I am so stupid. I should have never posted this. It is crap. I ...

I like it and think if we reword what Ican said, perhaps you could take it out of the narative, and restructure it, you may have something.

An empiricist, and the romantics, even Keats in his early days, would say people less informed have a more honest and fundamental connection - same goes for a brand of ...

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I think I am going to like you worgs. You got enough blah blah blah in your posts to actually stand toe to toe with bob. I aint got the ...

Hmmmmm..... very interesting. Something I will have to read again to see if it really sinks in as deep as it should. Hmmmmm....

kindaza plain for such a powerful topic. but it def gets the message across. nice work, easy to read.

Is this the beginning of something great? Or the end of something spectacular? My dictionary says the word is acrostic. May I challenge you? add IS DEATH. Yes or no, ...

Addie- The word FALSE. the sentence; Nasty things they are, those teachers. And with the boys, words like supposed, few will get words like that right when pronouncing them. it ...

Oh yeah, this poem is tight. Feel free to inflate your head and hope it does not exhaust on the next piece that may be crappy. ;-)

That is totally better, groovin'. Now work on puctuation. My only thought is a period after Retirement's gates. But there could be more. First place next independence day.

This is really good. I like anyway. It seems a bit hard on the flow in some places, and a bit choppy in flow. Of course I love the subject. ...