deiseach

This is a cute story! I really like the simplicity of the two characters, since they are children it fits within the story. The dialogue is realistic and also emotionally ...

It isn't my personal preference to read slurs, so you can ignore this criticism if I'm not the intended audience. I just feel the word could have been replaced with ...

She never missed, she was as precise as the come. But she still got betrayed by love. This is a really good story in my opinion, my only criticism would ...