defendthelegend

Hello I am going to review you. First of all. The way you have set it out isn't really like lyrics are usually set out. They usually are short lines ...

Hello, I think the content is very good. But I wouldn't have thought it to be a human. That suspense, really held me. But being a human is what you ...

Hello. I really liked this poem, it touched my heart. On here, a lot of the poems I read are long and drag on, missing the whole point and concept, ...

Hello. I like the repetition of the word understand! It really emphasises, what the writer is thinking and feeling, without saying a big amount. Also it shows another meaning of ...

Hello, The poem is good. The content is fabulous. But punctuation is lacking. There are many parts, within your poem which lack good punctuation. Whether you mean for your poem ...