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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Dreams of Ecstasy

    Hi, menushathenodi! I wanted to review your work. First of all, you are really good at rhyme. It makes really easy to read all the poem because it seems like ...

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: 103 days until July

    Hi, marmalade! I really like your poem. It is like devided in three parts. First one is the past; some memory that gives you sentimental feelings. It is really sensitive, ...

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Moving on from the Unsure

    Hi, Simplyelle! I'm going to give you a review. To start with, I love your poem, because I found a piece of me in it. Every word, every emotion, every ...

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: La mort est belle; Part I - He was amongst us

    Hi, Sharon! I wanted to give you a review. First of all, I just love poems about love, so it definitely fascinated me from the first sight. I usually describe ...

    Mar 29, 2017


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson