deavarna_satina

Okay, finally got around to writing my review. Gotta love the year 12 work load... Well, on to the nit-picking! I feel bad about skipping out on so much but ...

Okay I have saved my comments for the last chapter posted because I simply couldn't demonstrate enough self-restraint to stop from going straight to the next one! I'm absolutely hooked. ...

Ooh, brilliant! I liked this a lot. It captivated me from the very beginning with your talk of gold dust. It befuddled me a little, but was a good opening. ...

Hello! Long time no read! Though that one's my fault... **tugs collar awkwardly** But now I'm back and ready to critique you! Okay, I like your portrayal of Trey's nerves ...

Hey! I'm back! Thought I'd start off by reading your latest. Very nice. Some really good description. Bit of nit-picking... Her trained eyes could barely make out the shape of ...

Wow... You actually had me in tears! I feel like such a sap... No, hang on, I'm not the only one you've had crying. Must just be your superb writing ...

I'm hooked. From the very first line you had my interest. I like the idea of the text message. Something so silly, generally to be ignored by recipients. It's a ...

Ooch, chills. I liked this. Good imagery, short and sweet, overall enjoyable. Well, enjoyable doesn't sound like the right word to use here... how about touching? My only problem with ...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You convey Lukas's feelings with skill and I definately felt his pain and fury. To have something like that happen when he had just decided to give ...

I'm a massive Twilight fan and I have to defend you. Your story is very different to Twilight. The fact that there are vampires and werewolves doesn't automatically make it ...

I am in love with this story. I actually like it better than your other one (quite a feat!). The badass vampire. It's good and a more refreshing take on ...

I felt that the way Diana and Charlie were able to talk about the love between Charlie and Nicholas so easliy a little... strange. Personally, I would find it a ...

Aw love how decent Nicholas is about his mind-reading. Such a gentleman. Your characters are certainly developing and I see that you have mentioned how fast their relationship is moving. ...

LOVE the microwave dinners **chuckles to self**. Interesting idea there. I guess if everyone else in society enjoys these quick and easy fixes, why not vampires, too? I am VERY ...

Wow, I really am hooked dear :-) I wasn't going to comment again until the end, but I just wanted to note that I think that Nicholas and Charlie's 'friendship' ...