deavarna_satina

Tut tut, beccy ec. You're not 18 yet. You've still got 11 days. Oh, and you'd better give a couple of reviews before you post again. Those are the rules ...

Looky here, I have some catching up to do. You've posted 3 whole chapters in my absence! He greets me with a smile that lights up the room and a ...

Oh no, how could you, Ashley?! How could you leave me so unsatisfied? You cruel person! Not continuing? :smt089 I swallow and rise my head, just as Evander enters, with ...

Widowed at only twelve years of age and pregnant. Wow, twelve? Are you sure that the ancients would trade away their daughters at such a young age? I know of ...

Hello! :smt006 Your story looked so sad with no reviews, so I'll remedy that for you. First, a bit of nit-picking! Collin was perhaps the most sought after boy in ...

I haven't seen you around here before, so let me start by welcoming you to YWS! :smt039 We are all really nice here, and we hardly ever bite. When we ...

Mwahahahah, it is me! I am STALKING YOUR POSTS! Well, seeing as I'm all out of 'Michelangelo's Day and Night', I thought I'd read through your other big and popular ...

Hey Ashley! Sorry it took me so long to review this. I actually read it as soon as you posted it, but I forgot to write my crit :oops: Oh ...

Ah, you didn't disappoint. This was as good as the last one. Is it me, or do I detect a hint of homo-sexuality to this romance? If so, more power ...

Greetings! An interesting story you have here. It has certainly grabbed at my attention, even though it would appear that few 'attention-grabbing' events have occured in this first chapter. Take ...

A break in the clouds allowed a single thread of buttery light hit the ocean before the sun disappeared behind the horizon. I don’t think I would ever know if ...

Ah, you've done well with working in the tone of sorrow. I haven't picked up on any areas in need of nit-picking, so I'll get straight to the important stuff ...

The sky cried with open sorrow, the clouds parting to reveal a downpour of acid tears that stung the faces of those who were unlucky enough to feel such a ...

Ah, thunder is a great song. I like Hero Heroine better... Anywho, lets talk about your story. Well I don't know about your other comments calling it 'too perfect'. In ...

Well, I must say, I'm a little intimidated to crit your work. How on earth did you come across this kind of talent at the age of 13? I'm impressed. ...