dcar

Thanks very much for your review. I agree with your points, all of them, and it's great that you did this, however I did this for school as a short ...

The I am always with you part is supposed to be something that you can decide on so there is some of your imagination going into it. The five days ...

I like how you integrated history while also making it funny. I like how it was interesting and attention-grabbing. I wonder if you could have made some of the rest ...

I like how well you integrated history. I wonder if you could not use modern currency. I wonder if you could end it less abruptly. I liked the way you ...