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Re: Sweetest Downfall
Hey, it's Dawny for a review. So, when I opened this poem, knew that it was going to be something sad and ironic, and right away I felt the mood ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
Okay, first off...You are a really good writer - I really loved the description and details and all that Jazz. Xylia seems a lot like someone that I know in ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: True Love's Kiss~Chapter One and A Half
This was really good. I know that I used to watch Once Upon a time, and you characterized the character perfectly - it was like I was watching the dhow ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Broken wings prologue
So Dawn here to do a review... First of all, I just wanna point out that the date (Wednesday, May 26, 2014) isn't actually on a Wednesday, even with the ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Confessions- Chapter 1
It was pretty good. However, it seems as if you were barely describing like five events into one chapter and there wasn't really any set interaction with the characters as ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Tides---Chapter One, The Wind
Let me just say, it is really hard doing what you did in third person - and I mean that as a compliment -, so good job on that. I ...
May 25, 2014